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With the developing of the society,English is more and more important than before ,so ,we should learn English well.I found that a part of our classmates lost the confidentions for learning English.As a representive of English,I am worried about it. English is an international language,it is used all over the world.There are many benefits about learning English well,such as communication,economic,and so on. How can we learn English well?Now,I will tell your.Firstly,listening,we listen to the radio every day,and go on,you will find that your Enlish listening have a great development.Secondly,reading,reading is a good way to learn English well,it can help you to correct your pronunciation.Thirdly,speaking,do not be shy before the people,you should speak your English loudly,no one will laught at you! I hope your can make great progresses in English!