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I come form FuJian and I love it very much.I remember when I was kid the village is beautiful.There are a lot of trees surrounded the village,Rivers are so clean and sometimes you could look at many fish thought the water.Buidlings are single and small,the streets are norrow.Peolpe work hard but their's life are pool.However,those memory stayed in the past.Now,the buildings and stores have been built everywhere by people.There are many kinds of car are driving in streets.Industial is developing cause environment becoming more and more terrible.The trees and fish reduce slowly.So I hope everyone try their's best to do something to change the environment.The world is belongs to us ,If we could't procte it ,we will lost our homeland.