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I come from FuJian and I love it very much.I remember about the village's things.There are a lot of trees surrounded the village,rivers are so clean and sometimes you could look at many fishes thought the water.Buidlings are single and small,the streets are narrow.No matter Peolpe work hard ,their life are still pool.However,that memories stayed in the past.Now,the buildings and stores have been built everywhere by people.There are many car driving in streets.Industial is developing cause environment becoming more and more terrible.The trees and fish reduce slowly.So I hope everyone try their best to do something to change the environment.The world belongs to us ,if we could't procte it ,we will lose it our homeland.