小学三年级英语作文:My school

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My school lies in hangzhou,zhejiang province.it is huge and very beautiful.there are four pillars at the gate of the school.that is a magnificent sight.and there is a small pool across the pillars. the fishes swmiming in the pool. After entering the school gate，we can see the a big rock where crave where can I get a big broad shelter a thousand, ten thousand spans wide in the center of our school .