一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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A Busy Day Today I did the housework,did the homework,played ping pong and I wached TV.Mamy telled me I am very good,I am very happy!But I am can not play ping pong,so I am fell then,but I am happy too.And our TV is new,so it is nice.It is a very busy day!I am had a good time!