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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨。

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Study indicated that people's income increases with their education levels up. In a word, the typical high-school graduate earn much less than the average college graduate. It seems that a perfect resume can build on a stronger foundation of bright future. Therefore, numerous high school students with their parents build the midnight oil in the sake of being admitted into a key university. Whereas, do a person's ability and quality count on a paper, the certificate? I think not. In some extent, a certificate reflects the talent of its holder. When in an interview, the officials justify you from the resume, which of a college graduate expresses more experience, knowledge and skills in comparison with a high-school graduate. As we go further on the way of education, we increase our expenditure in time and money as well broaden our horizons, which are appealing to the employees. Finally, those people who gained higher education are perceived as the adequate personnels in the intensive competition. To summary, a degree can not decide who you are to be, but it is ridiculous that we look down upon itself and its holders.

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