单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;文章上下文衔接自然;从句数量不足。
My New Teacher Miss Chen is my new teacher. She teach our English. She is old, but she very funny. She is kind, but sometime she is strict. She look like is my second mather. One day, I'm ill,the teacher took care of me and comforted me.l like my English teacher very much!