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文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；把握下长难句在文中的分布；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，对拼写检查也要重视。
It goes without saying that the greatsest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.I can agree with it. If someone is interesting in something,and spend it for something,he will be great successful.For example,Edison who are addicted in inventing spent most of his life in invented light,eventually,he invented light.
