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Good friend My good friend is a boy. He name is Lu Shui bi. He like play sport. He like playing bastketball. He like baseball best. He don't like math class, he sometime plays in math class. He like English and Chinnses, he very hard-working. Sometime, he teaches my play basketball. He is my good friend.