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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

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要求：: Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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句式变化较为明显，句法基础不错；全文结构较为严谨；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写方面也要加强。

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It goes without saying that the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it. I can agree with it. If someone is interested in something,and spends it for something,he will be successful.For example,Edison who is addicted to inventing spent most of his life on inventing lamp，confronting much trouble and failure,soluting many problems, eventually,he invented lamp.

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