文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
With the developing of the society,English is more and more important than before,so,we should learn English well.I found that a lot of our classmates lost the confident ions for learning English.With a representative of English,I am worried about it. English is an international language,and it is used all over the world.There are many benefits for learning English well,such as communication,economic,and so on. How can we learn English well?Now,I will tell you.Firstly,listening,we listen to the radio every day,and go on,you will find that your Enlish listening have a great development.Secondly,reading,reading is a good way to learn English well,it can help you to correct your pronunciation.Thirdly,speaking,do not be shy before the people,you should speak your English loudly,no one will laugh at you! I hope you can make great progress in English!