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采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多。
It goes without saying that the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it. I can agree with it. If someone is interested in something,and spends it for something,he will be successful.For example,Edison who is addicted to inventing spent most of his life on inventing lamp，confronting much trouble and failure,solving many problems, eventually,he invented lamp.Therefore,if you want to do something,you should spend on it.If you have some trouble,please don't worry,you can find the way to solve it by trying your best. There is no way to success without hard work.Therefore, if there is a way to make my life more meaningful, I believe it should be to find something I'm interested in and also is helpful to others or the whole society. Only in this way can I keep my passion throughout my life.
