小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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Jim's family Jim a family of three people. He father, he mather, and he. Jim's father is a postman. Send mail every day. He fathet is older than mather.He's very strcit.Jim's mather is a factory worker. Work hard in the factory every day.She's very kind.Jim is a student. Monday to Firday get to school. Jim is very hard-woring. This is Jim's family, they are very happy.