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It Is Unwise To Put All Eggs In One Basket Generally speaking, put all eggs in one basket, it makes the egg easier to broken, cause all eggs waste, so, in my opinion, it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. Here are my viewws. First of all, many people used to put all attention in one thing, for example, parents always think only study is the only way for children, they put too much focus on their grade, but not everyone good at study, making them too hard to study, finally lost their spirit in their age. So, I think we should reday to many ascept to make children have a good grow. Then, there are many people focus on doing one thing, so that they do not how to talk to others, how to do their own thing, which cause them far away from society, become a good-for-nothing, only can do what they study. What a pity. Last but not least, put all eggs in one basket must let us lose many interesting things, we will far away from our really life, and very easy go into a wrong way, if we do not parpare enough mean to manage our life, we must not a prefect man. To sum up, it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket, in order to have a interesting and colorly life, dividing eggs in more basket.
