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Air pollution With the industralization city developing rapidly,the air pollution of many cities around the world have been more and more seriously. The damages of air pollution have a bad influence on human beings ,the damages mainly contain three ideas.Firstly,there is not cleaning air for us to breath any more,the polluted air contains too much substance which will hurt our body if we take in.Secondly,the unclear air damages plants as well.Thirdly,air pollution results in increasing CO2,as a result,the earth becomes hoter and hoter. There are so many solutions to the air pollution,for example,we can go out by public transport rather than taking cars.Likewise,we decrease the number of papers we use,for preventing from cutting trees.The most importantly,we must turn pollutional way of developing eocnomic into green way,likely,the government cuts down the number of factories in scale.