作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
With the developing of the society,English is more and more important than before,so,we should learn English well.I found that a lot of our classmates lost hearts for learning English.With a representative of English,I am worried about it. English is an international language,and it is used all over the world.There are many benefits for learning English well,such as communication,economic,and so on. Do you want to leart English well?And how should we do?Now,let me tell you. Firstly,listening,we listen to the radio every day,and go on,you will find that your Enlish listening have a great development.Secondly,reading,reading is a good way to learn English well,it can help you to correct your pronunciation.Thirdly,speaking,do not be shy before the people,you should speak your English loudly,no one will laugh at you! I will glad to see you can make great progress in English!