语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits, weather we have some good learning habits means weather we can study quicklier or slowlier. If we have a good habit in doing something, then, we should try to keep it in doing everything, for example, when we are reading books, we always don't like others talk to us, so when others are reading. we will keep quiet to avoid disturbing them. It is a single thing, but it shows that a habit is from a small thing. This habit will let us pay attention to what we are doing in anytime. Then, how could we develop a habit? Study couldn't break away from daily lifes, so a learning habits's develop is from life, for me, I always careless about anything I do, when I do maths, I always do some small mistakes, it isn't a good habit no matter in life or in study, in order to aboid this mistake, I press myself to do one thing at least twice, then I overcome this mistake. So, if we find our a small bad habit, do not ignore it, it may be does a big mistake in one day.