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It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits, weather we have good learning habits mean weather we can study faster or slower. If we have a good habit in doing something, then, we should try to keep it in doing everything, for example, when we are reading books, we always don't like others talking to us, so when others are reading. We will keep quiet to avoid disturbing them. It is a single thing, but it shows that a habit is from a small thing. This habit will let us pay attention to what we are doing in anytime. Then, how could we develop a habit? Study couldn't break away from daily life, so habits' development is from life, for me, I always careless about anything I do, when I do maths, I always do some small mistakes, it isn't a good habit no matter in life or in studies, in order to avoid this mistake, I press myself to do one thing at least twice, then I overcome this mistake. So, if we find a small bad habit in our life, do not ignore it, it may does a big mistake in one day.