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【题目要求】
Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others, however, believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
【题目讲解】
这回试题难不倒烤鸭。冲突的焦点落在[有必要设立图书馆]或[没有必要]，而不是单一的立场library PK Internet。在家使用因特网的好处太多，可是利用图书馆可以补足其功能complementary。
两个问题。引言3 sentences之后，1. 讨论二者的利弊，看中体的承段6 sentences与转6 sentences段。2. 考生提出看法，看合段的结论3 sentences。
起段引言 Introduction
开头第一句。申论主题：使用因特网可以取得各种资讯Vs.图书馆对大众有利。
开头第二句。集中焦点：冲突是两难自解。
开头第三句。一分为二：分头指引讨论二者利弊。
文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；文章高级词汇表达灵活，还要注意词汇拼写的检查；熟练使用了一些长难句。
opinions vary on the issue of the necessity of establishing libraries in each town. some people believe government is obliged to build free libraries for public, while others think that is a waste of money since information is available on internet which is more easy to abtain. I admit the advantages of both ways to obtain information, but I prefer the option of open more free public libraries. firstly, as a entity, libray provides not only tangible knowledge via spesific books or paper material, but also dilever information by computers, which is not conflict to the application of internet. secondly, free public libray
