2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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The most interesting place that I recommand The interesting places are beyond count,among which you can't miss out the chance to get a glance at nanjing. My reasons for recommanding it are as follows;First,nanjing is a cultivated city,if you come here ,you will not come back empty-handed.Second,numerous notable spots will come into your sights,you can appreaciate the night scenery at the Confusious Temple,where you can taste all kinds of snacks and go boating.what's more,you can choose some less commanding places such as 1912 block,where you can spend a sleepy evevning or order a coffee . of course ,there are more another places which deserve your going.going. Welcome you to China ,I Will be your consultant .Every time you are in china should be happy. yours sincerely bingo