简单句偏多了;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,另外文中有较多拼写错误。
I have a good friend who named Linda.She has long black hair.And she is thin.After class,we always play togerther.Linda is clever so if I have someyhing diffcult in study,I will ask for help to her.She is outgoing and she have many friend.But she best friend is me.And so am I.what's more,we all like reading ad drawing.Linda's home is near mine.So I often go to her home to invite her to play in park.We always have a happyday.