2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文章组织结构良好；作者使用词汇表达不够灵活，需要多使用一些高级词汇；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

What is a strong will?Ask the man on the street and chances are he will say is the mostimportant factor of one thing.A man without a strong will couldn't reach his aim forever. A man only with a firmness will can done a great mission. There was an old saying can proved this "where there is a will ,there is a way." It is compatible for students too not only for great man. If students doesn't study hard,they won't become a useful man.