简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;词汇表达不够丰富,要增加高级词汇的使用;文中衔接词丰富。
My best friend is Linda. She has long black hair and big eyes. I like to talk with her because she is so clever and humour. Linda always gets good grades but my achievement is very poor. When I in a jam, I often ask for help to her.What's more, we always play together.