简单句比重过高,另应加强复杂句的练习;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
I have a good friend who is a beautiful girl. She has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is better. She is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books, playing computer games and chess. She is a nice person that I've see. She often helps us so our classmates like her very much.