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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10392
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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高级词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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As the saying goes:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.It is means that all of things we should set two plans in order to prevent accident.Avoid unnecessary things to happen. In our life,we usually to reach a goal that can't considerate about anything else.All of our time and energy to devote in this things.Maybe this way can help us do something more concentrated.But,if we fail to finished the things that we can't acquire anything.In the contrary,if we prepared two things ,one is fail we still have another.So we unnecessary to worried about the result that we can't obtain anything. As for me,there are two method to accomplish one thing,which I must prepared two ways in case of other condition.This is my view about this point.

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