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字数：300 满分：100分
有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；可适当增加从句的使用；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。
The Right Way of Save Money Generally speaking, as students, we do not have much money to do anything we want, except some very rich students. So we make many approach to save our money, so that we can do what we want. But I think a wise way to save money is very important, and students should find the right way. Here are my views. For example, my roommate who wants to go to Wuhan have a trip, so she prepare for a long time to save money, her eats few, and eat twice a day, but, as our age, health diet is very important, so her shouldn't have been has a unhealthy diet. By the way, in order to have a healthy body, we not only need eat dinner, also need some fruit and so on to make sure we have enough nutrition, so we should have a health lifestyle. If you have a bad body, how can you have a good trip. So, we should find a good way to save money. In my opnion, you can find a work during your spare time, you had better as a teacher or a saler, I think it can make you save money, also can improve your experience. As a students, the most important thing is study, so you shouldn't buy expensive things to make you look wealth, you should take care youself, so, find a health and easy way to save money, have a good lifestyle.
