2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中高级词汇比较灵活，总体词汇表达贫乏，文中拼写错误稍多；文章层次较为清晰；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。

I want to take him to my city's proud, the Great Wall of China. It created by the many Chinese' acknowledge ,being a symbol of China. In the past , Chinese fighted with Japanese for our land, our companies, our dears and so on, then, the Great Wall were builted as military tool.