2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文章衔接手法恰当；文中高级词汇使用较丰富，词汇量积累仍然需要；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。

I want to take him to my city's proud, the Great Wall of China. It were created by the many Chinese' acknowledge ,being a symbol of China. In the past , Chinese flighted with Japanese for our land, our companies, our dears and so on, then, the Great Wall were builted as military tool.