2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；可适当增加从句的使用，注意几处句子错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

As the development of the Net, online shopping had been a style of fashion. online shopping have many advantages. First, it conveniences us for the goods can be taken to our hands and not go out personally. Second, it takes a trend of goods' diversification, takes many chances to choose goods of style, quality, and store......Also,it takes the disadvantages, online shopping can't guarantee true messages , we can't take the quality of coat before pays......According to myself who as a student, I want to the store to buy something expensive and buy something cheap relative to student online, I think it's cheap affordable. Personal decision that we make depends personal opinion, not right surely, but is suited to ourselves. This is my suggestion.