2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

With the development of the Net, online shopping had been a style of fashion. Online shopping has many advantages. First, it conveniences us because the goods can be taken to our hands and not go out personally. Second, it takes trend of goods' diversification, takes many chances to choose goods of style, quality, and store......Also,it takes the disadvantages, online shopping can't guarantee what the true messages, we can't take the quality of coat before pays......According to myself who as a student, I want to the store to buy something expensive and buy something cheap what relative to student online, I think it's cheap affordable. Personal decision that we make depends personal opinion, not right surely, but is suited to ourselves. This is my recommendation.