文章组织结构良好;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化。
my village In past years,there are many trees around our hometown ,the fish played happness in the stream,people worked hard but moneyless,all the house were poorly.Now,Great changes have taken place in my home villagec.High buildings and companys filled in the streets,cars were running on the land,Indertic is growing day and day,but our environment is trun to bad.Wooden cut down,fish disappeared.Solve such pullution is a matter urgency.