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It is obvious that adolescents today are becoming a lot more self-conscious than ever. Thus, one can never fail to see rash teenagers making immature decisions merely through what they hear or see instead of thinking twice before drawing their conclusions, which is beyond dispute and undoubtedly unwise. The reasons why I insist on the point that we ought not to reach a conclusion irresponsibly like that lies in the following two aspects. To begin with, we are living in an age when the internet offers easy access to massive information from which rumors arise abundantly as well. Therefore, one will find it hard to differentiate truth from lies. And how possibly could decisions that based on false assumptions be valid? In addition, since we can never be short of practical guidance and necessary supervisions from considerate adults, we might as well take into consideration their opinions. To sum up, it is unwise for us to define anything as first sight. Only by careful thought and accurate analysis can we come up with persuasive opinions and then make reasonable conclusions.
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