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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40870
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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。

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It is obvious that adolescents today are becoming a lot more self-conscious than ever. Thus, one can never fail to see rash teenagers making immature decisions merely through what they hear or see instead of thinking twice before drawing their conclusions, which is beyond dispute and undoubtedly unwise. The reasons why I insist on the point that we ought not to reach a conclusion irresponsibly like that lie in the following two aspects. To begin with, we are living in an age when the internet offers easy access to massive information from which rumors arise abundantly as well. Therefore, one will find it hard to differentiate truth from lies. And how possibly could decisions that based on false assumptions be valid? In addition, since we can never be short of practical guidance and necessary supervisions from considerate adults, we might as well take into consideration their opinions. To sum up, it is unwise for us to define anything as first sight. Only by careful thought and accurate analysis can we come up with persuasive opinions and then make reasonable conclusions.

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