拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。
For about 120 dollars, China’s Great Wall can be left by visitors' mark on a fake wall which was built recently in the name of preventing graffiti on the real structure.The management office of the Juyongguan section of the Great Wall in Beijing built the fake wall and will charge 999 yuan for carvings on each brick, daily newspaper The First reported. With 9,999 bricks available, the marble structure could help management earn 9.9 million yuan. Juyongguan’s management said they were hoping to satisfy visitor’s desire to leave something behind—usually their name or words of love—while discouraging them form caving graffiti on China’s best-known cultural relic. The Great Wall, which receives four million visitors a year, has suffered greatly from graffiti. But the project has come under some criticism with The First citing (引用) one expert as saying many schemes to ‘protect’ the wall are actually aimed at getting profits from the cultural treasure. The fake wall is located near the most-visited section of the real wall in Badaling and visitors usually travel to Juyongguan on their way to Badaling.