托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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As the technolgy progresses so quickly, the way people live and learn all have changed dramatically. The emergency of the recreational electronic products, and the avalibility of the cheap cellphones and personal computers, make the childhood of the students more enjoyable and full of traps. However, as for the university students, the advances can grant them with more powerful tools to learn the knowlenge and master the skill to communciate. For students in the primary school, it is quite possible that they have a lot of opportunities to access the cell phone and computers. They can spend a whole summer vocation in the computer games which are so interesting that these kids put their homework aside and remerber it unitl the last day. Usually, children do not have strong incentive and deep understandings about the study. They need to be told that study is more important than the entertainment and long time exposure to the computer games is detrimental to their physical and mental health. Hence, the teachers and especially the partents should take more care and be more responsible. It is necessary for them to distinguish the bad activity from the good one and supervise the children more effectively. Considering that it is not easy to give up the habit, a little wisdom is sometimes required. On the other hand, when the kids have developed the healthy habits of studying and skills of managing their time, educating is a easy thing. In universities, students can apportion their time well. Use the cell phone to keep in touch their parents and old friends, play the online games to get rid of the unhappy things and refresh themselves, make new friends through the social networking Web sites. The convenience brought by the technology advances meke them more sociable and thus more prepared for the future job. In conclusion, it is more and more important to cultivate children's good habit of leaning and time managing in their young ages. Educating is more difficult in these early stages, in the primary schools and middle schools. But in the university, educating is easier thanks to these technology changes.