文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少;能够运用简单的从句,但不熟练;文中拼写错误比较多,用词也稍显贫乏。
I have a good friend,he name's huang gui yuan.we are comrade,he lifing in zhong shan city huang pu town,du yuang part,spateth company,wa are meeted at fout yeas ago,so we are together work on line,i'm dit age to him.now we are old many yeas, woo woo woo woo woo I have a good friend I have a good friend