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假设你是某公司销售助理王海，请给David Smith先生写一封回信，内容包括：
1感谢对方订购100箱衬衫；
2建议用纸箱而不用木箱装运，并列举纸箱的优点；你公司最近与别的美国公司交易中也用过纸箱，效果很好；
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Dear David Smith
作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
David Smith Hello. I is sales manager Wang Hai, thank you very much for your order 100 boxes of our shirts, we thank you for your support. Here I suggest we cooperate in the future can be used when the carton to pack instead of wooden cases, cartons and convenient portability, low cost, we and other Usa Inc trading are also used in carton, effect is very good! After seeing the hope to reply, look forward to working with you to cooperate next time! Wang HaI TO YOU
