雅思写作范文:父母应该多陪孩子

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As the paces of living are accelerating in cities and villages all over the world, people are accustomed to the phenomenon that parents are gradually spending less and less time with their children. However, in my opinion, I think the "parents-off" phenomenon should be changed, for to form a harmonious society requires parents to accompany kids for sufficient time. Children develop their view to the world at a young age, which means whether the parents are around plays an important role in their future development. For instance, if a kid fell off from a bicycle without a parent around, the kid may suspect everything in the world can be dangerous and never have the courage to try new toys again, due to a lack of comfort and encouragement from the seniors at the very first beginning. Moreover, if a kid did something wrong like bully weaker kids living in the neighborhood, he needs to be educated and punished by his parents, or he would keep doing the same things along his growth. As parents are the most credible persons for every kid, they are responsible for building up the justice and kind spirit for their child. However, sometimes the financial situation will keep parents away from thier children, like for many migrant workeds in China, only by working in big cities far away from their hometown, can they get enough money for their children to attend to schools. Under this circumstance, I think the government should provide low-cost nursery services by recruiting qualified university students to serve in certain schools, for students are the most passionate group to devote themselves to all kinds of social activities. Besides, the government should also put more investment to countrysides nationwide to build up working positions, in this way, people from remote countrysides can choose to work at home, along with attedning their children by themselves. In conclusion, parents should give enough time to their children, for accompanyment in the early age is criticle to the development of children.