雅思写作范文:父母应该多陪孩子

作者词汇基本功不错，建议今后多用高级词汇；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法基础较为扎实。

As the paces of living are accelerating in cities and villages all over the world, people are accustomed to the phenomenon that parents are gradually spending less and less time with their children. However, in my opinion, I think the "parents-off" phenomenon should be changed, for to form a harmonious society requires parents to accompany kids for sufficient time. Children develop their view to the world at a young age, which means whether the parents are around plays an important role in their future development. For instance, if a kid fell off from a bicycle without a parent around, the kid may suspect everything in the world can be dangerous and never have the courage to try new toys again, due to a lack of comfort and encouragement from the seniors at the very first beginning. Moreover, if a kid did something wrong like bully weaker kids living in the neighborhood, he needs to be educated and punished by his parents, or he would keep doing the same things along his growth. As parents are the most credible persons for every kid, they are responsible for building up the justice and kind spirit for their child. However, sometimes the financial situation will keep parents away from their children, like for many migrant workers in China, only by working in big cities far away from their hometowns, can they get enough money to support their children's education. Under this circumstance, I think the government should provide low-cost nursery services by recruiting qualified university students to serve in certain schools, for students are the most passionate group to devote themselves to all kinds of social activities. Besides, the government should also put more investment to countryside nationwide to increase employment, in this way, people from remote villages can choose to work at home, along with attedning their children by themselves. In conclusion, parents should spend enough time with their children, for accompany in the early age is critical to children's growths.