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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第45篇:实践学习和阅读学习哪个更好些

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:27浏览次数:11492
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作文题目:

Close observation opens up new worlds in many ways. It can tell us things we would otherwise never know. Most often, we see more when we look and listen. Fortunately, movies give us that option, but is requires diligence. Compare and contrast learning by doing to learning by reading.

In your opinion, which is better? Explain.

近距离观察能够开拓视野。对比和比较实践学习和阅读学习。依你看,哪个更好些?并作出解释。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
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可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持,也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇;文章层次较为清晰。

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As the advances of the technology and the globalization, the pace of modern persons' lives has accelerated quite a lot. We have to say goodbye to the slow lifestyle of the previous days, and embrace the challenges raised by the changing society. Working Quickly is a better choice than working slowly. The emergency of the Internet, the establishment of the transportation system across the world, the convenience of paying with dollars, shorten the period of a business. Market changes overnight and the businessman have to make decisions in a few days even hours. The world are never short of the competitors and compititions. Working slowly means suicide. A efficient and quick responding network of decision making is vital for any international companies. Moving quickly, may have risks, but hesitation means no chance at all. Wisdom, courage and efficiency are the requirments of the mordern business. Although there are risks when work quickly, there are no guarantee that working slowly makes everything right. Working and decision making is based on the full collection of the information of the current situations. But today's world changes so fastly that the accurancy of the collected information deteriorate quickly. It's a necessity that we should move before the validity of the knowledge expires. Sometimes, we can not tell what the future is going to be. We can only get a glimpse of the truth when we take our first step. The things will get better when we adjust our strategy based on the new situation. Moreover, the spirit of risking is very important for success, when we face this unpredictable world. After risking and making mistakes, we can become more informed and more confident. Persuing perfect or making sure that everything is right will make us check the condition all the time and unable to make decisions. All in all, working quickly and risking making mistakes are essential merit to survive in this mordern world and is a better altitude to the unpredictable life.

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