2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

Today,let me tell one of the traditaonal festivals------the Mid--Autumn---festival.The Mid---autumn Festival is the lunar calendar August--eighth . It is the family sit together that enjoy the full moon and eat moon cake together.In this festival ,we can do a lot of things.For example,we can go to a travel with our family.Parents hope during well festival with their kids.And we can find our friends,which can make a good friendship. The Mid--Autumn festival bring happy to people.This is the Chinese famous festival.