要点:
学习生活紧张、有意义(上课、完成大量练习……);
其它学科好,数学弱(花较多时间学习数学、家人和老师鼓励……);注意:
1. 词数为120左右;
2. 参考词汇:高考―The National College Entrance Examination4. 已给出的邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。
作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
How's everything going, I miss you so much ,eithher.Now I'm occupied with my literatures and make full use of everyday for the National College Extrance Examination .The days seem like busy but are meaningful,for doing many practises. As for myself,I'm weak in math, consequently,I spend much time in practicing it.As the saying goes:"Practice makes perfect." With the help from my teacher and the encouragements from my family,I'm confident in myself. My ambition is to go to a key university, where I'll major in the computer, expecting to be a computer engineer. In order to live up to who cares about me's expectation,I'll try my best to study hard and insist on my dream!