小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。

Lily is one of my best friends.She is twelve years old .She was born and Raised by her granny in Dahuang viliage Shizhen township Wannian county Jiangxi province. At the age of five,She was taken to Wenzhou city Zhejiang province to the effect that her parents can work hard for supporting her familly.She was a naughty and clever little girl,with a round face and two pure eyes.She was always smiling no matter some trouble came to her.Wow,I haven‘t seen her for several years.A little miss her.