2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；文章结构严谨，有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；作者词汇表达较丰富，学术词汇需继续加强，拼写检查要重视。

Air pollution With the industralization city developing rapidly,the air pollution of many cities around the world have been more and more seriously. The damages of air pollution have a bad influence on human beings ,the damages mainly contain three ideas.Firstly,there is not cleaning air for us to breath any more,the polluted air contains too much substance which will hurt our body if we take in.Secondly,the unclear air damages plants as well.Thirdly,air pollution results in increasing CO2,as a result,the earth becomes hoter and hoter. There are so many solutions to the air pollution,for example,we can go out by public transport rather than taking cars.Likewise,we decrease the number of papers we use,for preventing from cutting trees.The most importantly,we must turn the way of accelerating economic into the green,likely,the government cuts down the number of factories in scale.