2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

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Shenzhen, a newly-developed city, is seated in Guangdong province, China. Before the reform and opening policy was carried out, Shenzhen was nothing more than a fishing village, with a limited population of over 30 thousand. In 1980s, Chinese government established Shenzhen Special Economic Zone as the experimental plot for its socialist market economy. So far, Shenzhen has reached a huge population of over 1o million, accompanied with dramatic changes.