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Shenzhen is a newly-developed city in Guangdong province,China Before the implementation of reform and opening-up policy,it was but a fishing village only with a population of over 30 thousand In the 1980s,Chinese government established Shenzhen Special Economic Zone as the experimental plot for the implementation of socialist market economy.Currently,the population of Shenzhen has exceeded 10 million and the whole city has undergone tremendous changes. By 2014,the per-capita GDP of Shenzhen has reached 25 thousand dollars,equivalent to that of some developed countries in the world.As far as its overall economic power is concerned,Shenzhen is listed among the top cities in China.Due to its unique status,it is also an ideal place for the entrepreneurs at home and abroad to start their businesses.
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