2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文章衔接手法恰当；应增加从句和复杂句的使用，注意部分有错误的句子；文中有较多拼写错误，用词太过单一。

it is fantasitc tovisit my hometown for you . my hometown has many beautiful view in my mind. first,there are many rivers Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown，what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to se it is fantasitc tovisit my hometown for you . my hometown has many beautiful view in my mind. first,there are many rivers Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown，what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to se