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On Excessive Packaging Nowdays many goods have excessive packagings. Even a tiny thing it would be packed beautifully and lovely, let alone the truely expenssive things. It appears, it must have a reason. There is no denying that manufactures would like to make their company biger and bigger by a series ways. As a way, packaging can be understanding to some extent. It can improve the thing itself quantity and convey us a messenge that it's good, we can have a shot. However, not every thing like this, a terrible thing also can be packped as good as the better one which gets in the way of choosing the really things we need. Besides, manufactures should try their best to improve rather than concentrating on excessive packaging. As far as I'm concerned, there is no need for manufactures apins a lot on packaging.
