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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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Form this picture we can see a phenomenoe which the degree is higher unemployment rate is less.So I think study is very importance. In the picture we can find that the degree is higher weekly earning is higher. But in addition to what professional degree has less unemployment ,it has more weekly earning.From this we can know that learning is essential to our life.If you have a low degree,you will face with unemployment.It will influent you life.In nowday we can find more and more low degree expaciely in countryside.Because many chindren are addicate to the computer and lead to they have less and less interst in study.So they will give up study.When they face with society will have less work.But some people study hard, they will succes to they life. Maybe they will have a stable work. And they will have a happy life. In a word, we should study which everytime. In this way, we will have a happy life and have a stable work.

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