Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Form this picture we can see a phenomenoe which the degree is higher unemployment rate is less.So I think study is very importance. In the picture we can find that the degree is higher weekly earning is higher. But in addition to what professional degree has less unemployment ,it has more weekly earning.From this we can know that learning is essential to our life.If you have a low degree,you will face with unemployment.It will influent you life.In nowday we can find more and more low degree expaciely in countryside.Because many chindren are addicate to the computer and lead to they have less and less interst in study.So they will give up study.When they face with society will have less work.But some people study hard, they will succes to they life. Maybe they will have a stable work. And they will have a happy life. In a word, we should study which everytime. In this way, we will have a happy life and have a stable work.