作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;适当丰富句式;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
i have a good friend who is a beautiful girl.she has a long hair and blue eyes.she loves smell that whenever i see it i feel happy.we are second grade in the school.we go home together every day.i wish i can marry with her in the future.i think that we will have a lovely baby